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For professionals with a passion project

A professional plan for the book you keep putting off.

You don’t need encouragement. You need a clear diagnosis, a plan that fits the hours you actually have, and written notes you can act on between everything else.

Award-winning screenwriter, novelist, and fourteen years as a creative development executive.

Sound familiar?

Good at everything except this.

  • “I run a department. I don’t understand why I can’t get this thing to work.”
  • “I don’t have time to figure it out by trial and error.”
  • “Writing groups feel slow, and I’m not sure anyone there can tell me what’s wrong.”
  • “I’ve been carrying this book around for years.”
  • “I’m used to being good at things. Being a beginner again is uncomfortable.”
  • “I finally have the time. What I don’t have is another thirty years to figure it out alone.”

Most people who are good at their jobs stall on a first book for the same reason. Nobody handed them the order of operations.

Built around a full calendar

Professional development, the way it’s actually done.

Two hours of calls a month, notes you can read on your own schedule, and email office hours twice a week. Calls are by video and scheduled flexibly, so time zones are usually workable.

  1. We talk first

    Tell me about the project and where it’s stuck, or book a free discovery call. If a different package fits better than the one you picked, I’ll say so.

  2. You send the pages

    Manuscript, script, outline — whatever the package covers. I read it properly before we speak, so the call isn’t spent on first impressions.

  3. You get it in writing

    Every session comes with written notes — often before we speak, so the call is spent drilling into them rather than delivering them. Talk disappears; notes are something you can still work from three months later.

Where to start

Two ways in.

Where most professionals start

$1,200or 3 monthly payments of $400 · 3 months, 6 hours total

Novel Development Package

Three months of focused, sustained work on your novel, built around the way professional development actually happens.

  • Submit up to 15,000 words per month for review
  • Two one-hour video calls per month, analysing a different chapter each time
  • Written notes for every session
  • Twice-weekly email office hours
  • Flexible scheduling across the engagement

Spaces are limited — contact before booking.

Enquire about this package

$322

Single Session

For a fast, expert diagnosis of a specific problem before you commit to anything longer.

  • Submit up to 10,000 words for review
  • One-hour video call
  • Written analysis within 48 hours (up to 2,500 words)
Enquire about a session

What writers say

From people I’ve worked with

“Shawn is a really great support. He is always there to respond, and the answers he gives are detailed and sincere.”
Corinne
“Shawn offers clear, constructive feedback that really lands. After one session, I felt a door had opened — and that real growth was actually within reach.”
Angela Jiang

Questions

Before you get in touch

How much time does this take each week?

The calls are two hours a month. Everything else is your own writing time, and the plan means that time goes into the book rather than into working out what to do next.

Can we schedule around my work and time zone?

Yes. I work with writers across four continents. Calls are by video and scheduled flexibly across the engagement.

I set this book aside years ago. Is it too late to pick it up?

No. The development packages work from wherever you are: planning stage, mid-draft, or a manuscript that’s been in a drawer for years.

How do I pay?

Once we’ve confirmed the package is the right fit, I’ll send an invoice. The three-month packages can be paid monthly.

Free · No obligation

Let’s put it on the calendar.

Twenty minutes to talk about the book and work out which kind of support it actually needs.